For a freelance project I redesigned a few pages for a NY based company. Here are my revisions as shown below.
Our Story Page
Left Side (BEFORE) Right Side (AFTER)
Changes I made to ‘Our Story’ Page
- Deleted ‘Our Story’ at the center middle
- Pushed the first rectangular box upwards
- Made the box lighter as well. Light grayish
- Deleted ‘The New Shaving Company’ Text in the header and Changed it to ‘OUR STORY’
- Added the ‘Don’t take our word on it, look at the data’ Text
- The data infographic is to the right and I added arrows, so now consumers can cycle through the data and see why The NY Shaving Company is the best!
- Changed the overall font for titles to Oriyna MN and the body text to Musa
- Made the ‘Start Trial’ Button bigger
- Formatted everything to look more clean
Barbershop Page
Left Side (BEFORE) Right Side (AFTER)
Changes I made to the ‘Barbershop’ Page
- For ‘Our Services’ I changed the font to Oriyna MN and the body text to Musa.
- I added 2 lines, one long, one short right above ‘Our Services’ for aesthetics purposes
- Added a ‘Filter’ in the top left corner, so users can filter the kind of haircut or treatment they would like and the filter would provide you with what you selected.
- I reformatted everything and changed the fonts too
- Also spaced out the text to get rid of white space
- Changed the gray background to white (In the Our Services section)
- Made the video larger
Our Factory Page
Left Side (BEFORE) Right Side (AFTER)
Changes I made to the ‘Our Factory’ Page
- Expanded the entire page so it touches each side of the page
- Changed the fonts
- Deleted the second picture you had
- Resized all the pictures
- Pushed the picture (lady squeezing the cream out) that was on the bottom near the top and made it connect with the other pictures
- Added Golden Start Trial button
- Also Added a ‘Factory Location’ box where consumers can view where the locations of the stores are
- Enlarged and Flipped the razor blade pic and placed it to the right
- Added Golden Learn More button